jueves, 24 de febrero de 2011

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Schenker, in her article, “” Smart house”, Speak up 169, accounts for that in the future, thanks to technology, houses will be networked making people´s life easier and comfortable. Internet will connected electronic devices and will have chips to control activities like housework, communications, bills or people´s social life. Disadvantage of having a networked home do not seem to be significant. People will just have to pay some dollars for the chips, the connection to internet and security measures to protect system against cyber pirating. People do not have to afford maintenance because services will repair themselves. The author concludes the money that people spend, mean considering the valuable benefits of having a smart house.

1 comentario:

  1. Miguel,
    There are some words that should be omitted to reduce the paragraph, for example: accounts for, by changing this to states, say, you reduce one word. In people will just have to pay, omit just.

    Regular.

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